Practice IOC

1) Preparation:

2) Recording: http://vocaroo.com/i/s1sjTQxj5yKB


3) Grading:

• Knowledge and Understanding of the text or extract: 7
• Whenever I would give a claim, I backed it with textual evidence that directly supported the claim. I was able to show my understanding of the extract by giving explanations of each portion and showing how it affected the bigger picture. 
• Understanding of the use and effects of literary features: 6
• I think that I was able to discuss the use of literary devices in an effective manor as well as the effect it has on the audience and overall text. However, I could have gone into greater detail about how these devices affect the audience in order to receive a higher score.
• Organization: 4
• I feel as though I was pretty well organized as I went from literary device, to literally device and gave examples for each one. I also went in the order of the text so that it would be coherent and easily followed.
• Language: 3
• My language was effective and clear but I probably could have used more formal language while discussing elements from the text. I also need to work on my use of filler words and work on rambling.